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Anonymous (not verified) says:
Noirish?
Aside from the fact that the movie is just terrible, it is also insulting and mysoginistic.
But I agree with the above poster that the style is the major problem. That second to last paragraph is a textbook example of not having a clearly defined idea.
The topic sentence has absolutely nothing to do with the final 3/4 of the paragraph!
Noirish?
Aside from the fact that the movie is just terrible, it is also insulting and mysoginistic.
But I agree with the above poster that the style is the major problem. That second to last paragraph is a textbook example of not having a clearly defined idea.
The topic sentence has absolutely nothing to do with the final 3/4 of the paragraph!